Hey reader,
In literacy we have been learning about space I picked Earth because I get to know how the Earth was made I have made a s entice.
In space writing I am learning about Earth is the planet where people live if there was no sun the earth would be iced and no people will be living on earth.People should stop making new things because more electronic things our planet will start to become electronic earth where there's only robot on the earth people should not put plastic things in the water out the animals will all die and there be no more animals our people. The trees have lots of leaves on the branch there are billions of trees in the world people are starting to make trees into house there are more houses than trees people should plant more tree seeds. The end
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, July 25, 2019
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Hi buddy! I like the way you highlight the words of living things so that i know know all the stuff that are alive. Next time you could add some more full stops. This reminded me of when i had to pick a thing to write about and there was a space one. by Michael
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