First there was this mechanic man who was good at making robots then he had to go to the dangerous robot of them all he is as scary as tarantulas and snakes teeth then the mechanic knocked on the door loud then the robot grabbed him without saying a word then the mechanic thought of what kind of robot would do this then when he finished the robot shows itself to the mechanic and the mechanic is amazed of what kind of robot it is then mechanic helped the robot get fixed then when it was fixed he went to the robot and said do you want to live with me and be friends and the robot said yes and that’s how they became friends that’s how they became friends but in the future it will not end well they will have to travel through the galaxy to find something that no one has ever seen in there life I bet it is going to be a new robot. Then after it happen they will become best friends again at the end.
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Hi Rj its lukas from south hornby school.
ReplyDeletei like the way how you described your work here Your work is great. I like the picture.