In writing today we had to do the same thing but we had to try and change up the subject, and we all had one today my group was independent and my group wanted to plan it but I went straight to it and got it all right and here is my one hope you like it.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, July 28, 2020
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Kia ora Rj its me Kahu (in your homeroom) i like the way you've done 5,7,5 for your syllables. I like the way you added images but maybe next time you could ad png images.
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