IN writing today we had to write about these animals that the teacher gave us and try to make as many sentence as much as we can and then we to clap are hand like snake that is 1 sail able then we had to go on the template and make a copy and get finished and get it on the blog and here is my poem.
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, July 27, 2020
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Great work RJ. You have done a good job working out the right number of syllables for each line to describe a snake.
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